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FADE IN: Herald's Journey: Roger dies in the car crash.
Meeting the Antagonism: the mafia kill Roger.
Meeting the Hero: Charlie leaves prison.
Hero's Status: prisoners call out to Charlie as he leaves.
Meeting the Mentor: goodbye Mr Bridger.
Meeting the Romantic Challenge: Lorna waits for Charlie outside.
Developing the Goddess: this is the Pakistani Ambassador's car.
New Self: new clothes at the tailor.
Goodbye to the Old Self: you can put all this in the museum.
Hero's Capabilities: getting the wallet and the car.
Magical Gift: wallet and the car.
Foreshadow of the Journey: picking up the message.
Developing Characters and Relationships: Lorna gets Charlie the girls as a present.
Meeting the Herald 2: Roger's wife gives Charlie the briefcase.
Developing Characters and Relationships: Charlie sleeps with Roger's wife.
Call to Adventure: Roger's film about the heist.
Refusal: Camp Freddie puts the phone down on him.
Refusal: Bridger turns Charlie down in the toilet.
Developing Characters and Relationships: Bridger tells Freddie to give Charlie a going over; Bridger is into the Queen. Etc
Developing Challenges: Lorna finds Charlie with the girls and Freddie beats him up.
Overcoming Refusal: Bridger sees the news.
Push to the First Threshold: Bridger tells Freddie to green light Charlie's plan.
Foreshadow of the Foreshadow: needing Professor Simon Peach (Benny Hill).
Meeting Allies and Enemies: Persuading Peach; meeting the crew around the boardroom.
Hero's Capabilities: this is a very difficult job and the only way to get through it is to work together as a team and that means you do everything I say.
Middle Cave: preparing the cars; crashing the minis; you were only supposed to blow the bloody doors off.
Foreshadow of the Inner Cave: Bridger sees the mafia in the film footage.
Inner Cave: the funeral; Bridger warns Charlie about the Mafia.
Physical Separation: leaving for Italy on the ferry.
World of the Transformation / Journey: Italy.
Trial 1: overcoming the mafia on the mountainside.
Trial 2: replacing the computer programming/
Romantic Challenge Conquered: dropping Lorna off.
Foreshadow of the Sword and Atonement: the mafia watch the gold unload.
Departing from the World of the Trials / Leaving for the Sword: remove all the fingerprints.
Developing Characters and Relationships: you're not going to be sick, you're not going to have asthma and you're not going to have asthma etc; Peach following the fat woman.
Push to the Atonement: the gold is unloaded
Wolves Clothing: the English supporter dressed in the supporters colours.
Seizing the Sword: the English supporter triggers the traffic computers to shut off; stealing the Gold.
Near Death Experience: the police ram the doors.
Reward: the cars fall off the "battering ram"; they get away in the minis.
Atonement with the Father: they confront the police.
Apotheosis: they get away from the police.
Magic Flight: still pursued by the mafia; "they must have planned a way out…"
Refusal: difficulty getting into the bus.
Ultimate Boon: they've done it Mr Bridger.
Celebration: Bridger greets the audience.
Crossing the Return Threshold: in the bus.
Master of Two Worlds: celebrating in the bus.
Freedom to Live: the bus hangs over the cliff.FADE OUT
by Kal Bashir