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FADE IN: Antagonism / Heinous Act: the shooting.
Antagonist Pursuit of Magical Gift: the contract.
Developing the Magical Gift: with Ross about town.
Foreshadow of the Sword: cabbie drives Ross around.
Meeting the Hero and Loyal Ally: Frank in bed; Delgetti calls.
Hero and Loyal Ally relationship: Delgetti helps himself.
Meeting Antagonism 2 in his Ordinary World: going to see Chalmers.
Call to Adventure: Chalmers tells Frank to guard Ross.
Journey to the Magical Gift: Frank tells Delgetti what the job is.
World of the Magical Gift: Ross in the apartment.
Meeting the Mentor: Frank calls the Capt.
Meeting the Sacrificial Lamb: Stan.
Hero's Status: Frank gives Stan orders.
Meeting the Romantic Challenge in her Ordinary World: visiting Cathy at work.
Developing the Romantic Challenge: dinner.
Foreshadow of the First Threshold: Delgetti calls in.
Resisting the Transformation: Frank tells Cathy this is not for her.
First Threshold Marker: Stan and Ross are shot.
Antagonism Shadow: the assassins follow the ambulance.
Hero's True Nature: Frank watches over Stan.
Threshold Guardian: Stan tells Frank that Ross unlocked the chain.
Outer Cave: watching Stan in surgery / his wife.
Middle Cave: the Capt. gives the case to Frank.
Inner Cave: Chalmers confronts Frank.
Belly of the Whale: Chalmers can effect careers; he wants the Doctor replaced.
Physical Separation: the assassin arrives.
Trial 1: Outer Cave: the doctor tells Frank about the assassin.
Middle Cave: the assassin is spotted.
Inner Cave: the assassin is pursued but lost.
Trial 2: Outer Cave: Ross dies.
Middle Cave: Frank asks the doctor to keep the death a secret.
Inner Cave: Frank puts Ross under a John Doe and takes him away.
Foreshadow of the Transformation: Frank lives alone; he shops living-alone food.
Trial 3: Outer Cave: Chalmers finds out Ross is missing.
Middle Cave: Chalmers apologies to the photographer; can't get that picture.
Inner Cave: Frank hangs up; Chalmers wants Frank castrated.
Reward for passing the Trials: Cathy makes breakfast in his apartment.
Meeting the Oracle: the hotel receptionist tells the name of the cab company.
Seizing the Sword: finding the cab driver; getting the cabbie to retrace Ross' footsteps; getting the phone number.
Near Death Experience: the Capt.gets a writ from Chalmers.
Reward: the snitch tells Frank that Ross is alive; he realises there may be a deception.
Atonement: the car chase.
Apotheosis: the Capt. lets Frank follow his lead.
Ultimate Boon: using Cathy's car.
Refusal: Mrs Simmons not answering.
Magic Flight: Cathy sees the body and runs.
Forced to Transform: Frank and Cathy chat.
Rescue from Without: looking through the suitcases.
Crossing the Return Threshold: Chalmers reappears.
Catharsis 1: Ross is alive.
Journey to the Final Conflict: to the airport.
Battle 1: finding Ross.
Catharsis 2: Frank tells Chalmers to get outta here.
Catharsis 3: pursuing and capturing Ross.Freedom to Live / Transformation demonstrated: Cathy is in Frank's flat now (he's not alone).
by Kal Bashir