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Fade in / context / setting up the push to the First Threshold: the killers leave the motel; Billy kills the little girl.
Meeting the Hero, Romantic Challenge, Loyal Ally in their Ordinary World: Sarah wakes up and the family gather around.
Loop / Ordinary World / Character and Relationship Development /Foreshadow: the conversation over breakfast.
Hero and Romantic Challenge: Tom tells Edie he loves her.
Hero's Status: everyone knows and says hello to Tom.
Hero in his Professional World / World of the Push: Tom in the café.
Call to Adventure: Jack catches the ball; the school bully gets angry.
Refusal: Jack refuses to fight.
Hero and Romantic Challenge: Edie dresses up for Tom.
Loyal Ally and Romantic Challenge: Jack with his girlfriend.
Developing the Loyal Ally's Challenge: the school bully in the car.
Warning of the Journey: the school bully almost drives into the killers; I don't want to know.
Push to the First Threshold: the killers are broke; they're going to do something about it.
Threshold Guardian: old fella in the doorway; we're closing up.
Warning: I said coffee!
First Threshold: they grab Charlotte.
Forced to the Outer Cave: do her Billy! Tom kills the killers.
Physical Change: Tom is stabbed in the foot.
Middle Cave: Tom becomes a celebrity; congratulations from everyone.
Resisting the Inner Cave: Tom disinterested in talking to the reporters; doesn't want his face on TV.
Foreshadow of the Inner Cave: the black car waiting.
Inner Cave: Fogarty shows up in the café.
New Name / New Self: Fogarty calls Tom "Joey"
Resisting the Transformation / New Self: Tom refuses to recognise Joey.
Resisting the Transformation: Edie calls Sam.
Resisting the Transformation: Sam pulls over Fogarty.
Belly of the Whale: Sam tells them that Fogarty and his men are organised crime; are you in some kind of Witness Protection Program?
Pushed to the Trials and Transformation: Tom sees the car and follows it home.
Resisting the Transformation / Trial 1: Fogarty is not at the house; having to explain himself / lie to Edie and Jack.
Pushed to Transform / Trial 2: Edie buying shoes; Fogarty tells Edie about Tom.
Transformation / Trial 3: Jack beats up the school bullies.
Pushing Back / Trial 4: Tom reprimands Jack.
Transformation Complete: Edie confronts Tom; wants to know if what Fogarty says is true.
Seizing the Sword: Fogarty has Jack; Tom gets him back.
Near Death Experience: Fogarty almost kills Tom.
New Self: Tom accepts that he is Joey.
New Self: Jack becomes a killer by killing Fogarty.
Romantic Challenge Separation: Edie confronts Jack in hospital.
Loyal Ally Separation: Jack walks away from Tom.
Atonement with the Father: Sam turns up.
Apotheosis: Edie takes Tom's side.
Ultimate Boom: Tom and Edie have sex on the stairs.
Refusal: Tom is sleeping on the sofa.
Forced Away: Richie calls.
Magic Flight: Tom drives to Philadelphia.
Crossing the Return Threshold: Tom walks into his old bar.
Pushed to the Final Conflict: finish your beer and I'll take you to Richie.
Final Conflict: Tom kills everyone.
Master of the Two Worlds: Tom washes himself in the lake.
Return: coming home.Freedom to Live: accepted at the table.
by Kal Bashir