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FADE IN: context: the raptor eats a man.
Backstory: the law suit; the amber.
Introduce Heroes and their capabilities: Alan and Ellie are lead archaeologists.
References to the Antagonism: Alan references the raptors; how dangerous they are…."show them a bit of respect…"
Heroes Inner Challenge: "kids, you want to have one of those…!" Alan doesn't want kids but Ellie does.
Meeting the Supernatural Aid: John Hammond arrives.
Call to Adventure: "come to my park for a weekend…."
Refusal: "we're very busy, we've just dug up a…."
Pulled to the First Threshold: "I can compensate you by fully funding your research for a further three years…"
Meeting Enemies / the Shape Shifter / Foreshadow of the Physical Separation: the Dodgson arranges for embryos to be taken out of the park.
Journey to the First Threshold: on the helicopter.
Meeting Allies: Ian Malcolm.
Ally's Capabilities: Ian is a Chaos Mathematician.
View of the World of the First Threshold from a distance: "there it is…;" view of the park from the helicopter.
Danger on entry: the fast drop.
Developing Characters: how they buckle up.
Unique World of the First Threshold: the waterfall; the huge drop.
Physical Marker of entry: the gate.
Threshold Guardian: the gate.
Warning of Entry into the First Threshold: danger, 10,000 volts; "is everything safe…"
Time Pressure: "in 48 hours, I'll shut you down…"
Meeting the Magical Creatures of the First Threshold: Alan, Ellie et al see the dinosaurs.
Backstory: Hammond tells them how it's done….blood…cloning…DNA…Amber…
Foreboding of the Journey: "life cannot be contained; life finds a way…;""you bred Raptors!"
Threat of the Antagonism: the dinosaur eats the cow; contained within an electric fence; they show intelligent behaviour.
Developing characters and relationships: Hammond et al all having dinner.
Resistance to the Physical Separation: Malcolm thinks it's too dangerous; Ellie is worried how they will be controlled.
Foreshadow of the Physical Separation: the kids arrive.
Developing the Inner Challenge: Tim follows Alan around.
Foreshadow of the Physical Separation: the storm is approaching.
Threshold of the World of the Transformation: the gate into Jurassic Park.
Developing the Shape Shifter: Dennis has financial problems.
Foreboding: "God kills dinosaurs, Man kills God, Man makes dinosaurs, dinosaurs kill Man…""can't just suppress 65m years of gut instinct."
Developing characters and relationships: Malcolm and Ellie in the car.
Inner Challenge: Tim still following Alan around.
Foreshadow of the Physical Separation: they have to stop the tour.
Time Pressure: the storm approaches.
Pushing toward the Physical Separation: Dennis prepares to take flight.
Developing characters and relationships: Malcolm and Alan in the car; "I'm always on the lookout for a future Mrs Malcolm."
Physical Separation: Dennis runs; the power is turned off.
Trial 1: Tyrannosaurus Rex attacks; Alan saves the kids.
Journey to Trial 2: "be good enough to bring back my grand kids…"
Shape Shifter's Reward: Dennis is eaten.
Trial 2: Alan saves Tim.
Trial 3: The T-Rex chases Allie, Ian et al in the jeep.
Inner Challenge conquered: Alan comfortable with the kids in the tree; "what will you do now…?""I guess we'll have to evolve…"
Challenges confronted: Hammond and Ellie talking around the dinner table.
Comedic Element: the bronto sneezes.
Developing the Antagonism: Alan finds the eggs; they're breeding.
Foreshadow of the Sword: they rebooted and now they have to go and manually turn on the breakers.
Developing the Antagonism: the T-Rex and other dinosaurs are roaming free.
Meeting the Oracle: looking at the architectural drawings; they have to manually turn on the power.
Danger to the Sword: all the gates are open.
Threshold Guardian: the raptors are hunting Ellie and the gamekeeper.
Time Pressure: Ellie being guided to the power generator; Alan and the kids climbing the fence.
Near Death Experience: Ellie pursued by the Raptor; the gamekeeper eaten by a Raptor.
Reward: Timmy is alive; Alan and Ellie meet again.
Atonement with the Father: the kids are hunted by the Raptors in the kitchen.
Apotheosis: the Raptors are intelligent enough to open doors.
Ultimate Boon: Lex gets the system back online.
Refusal: the Raptors break through the glass; Hammond shouts "No!"
Magic Flight: Alan, Ellie and the kids run from the Raptors.
Rescue from Without: the T-Rex turns up and eats the Raptors.
Crossing the Return Threshold: they're not going to endorse the park.
Master of the Two Worlds: Hammond looks over his World.
Freedom to Live: Alan agrees to have kids.
by Kal Bashir